Feedback for Practical Productions

Sounds of the Underdogs (Vipesh's group-Documentary)

• Opening Montage- Very eye catchy, shots of graffiti and areas such as Acton, it gives us that 'urban' 'hip hop' feel, which I feel is excellent as it flows well with the theme of your production.
  
• Interviews are well constructed, they are all combined well, and are short and snappy as you have cut it down.
  
• You now need to add in titles in your interview so it is more eye catching and appealing to your audience.
  
• You might need to slightly increase your volume for your interviews, it is slightly low.
  
• Overall, it is looking good
  
• Team input is definitely needed as I only get to see Vipesh.
  

Asian Invasion (Hardeep and Asa) Documentary

• Excellent montage, you have got excellent footage (stuff from Southall, such as Mc D, quality Foods) This targets all audiences.
  
• I think what else you can do is capture stuff like Heathrow Airport, shots of London, Uxbridge, Ealing and so on in your montage.
  
• Your music is well chosen it flows in well, make sure you now add in the title of your documentary don't leave it to late.
  
• Overall it is looking really good. keep up the hard work.

Face of Fear (Simran, Nafisa and Rajan) Trailer

• This is BRILLIANT! You’re the first group that has got a lot of editing done, and it looks great.
  
• What you can now do, is look at tiny detail, such as institution and tidy up your trailer.
  
• You need to add in titles, like every other trailer has, such as produced by, directed by, when it is coming out (you know what I mean)
  
• Well done, and keep up the hard work (I hope Jova's not doing all the editing) lol

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